The poor Farmer couldn't move his upper body. he was immobilized in hay, his fresh fruit scattered everywhere the road next to him was yellow because the fruit was smeared by cars. Although he didn't know this he predicted it would happen. He roared angrily and tried to pull himself out but he was bound to the Bale he then tried wiggle, then heave, Pull, twist, yet to no avail. Suddenly a truck carrying wet cement crashed into the hay bale and cover the farmer and the hay bale in quick-drying concrete. Now the farmer is now a official landmark.
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Levi,
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, I couldn't read all of your 100wc, as the typing went off the page.
I really enjoyed the wee bit that I could read as there was lots of description.
I got the gist from the final line and imagine that you meant that the man in the hay is now a landmark.
Michelle, Team 100wc,
Melbourne, Australia